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Post by Galius on Feb 13, 2006 14:28:42 GMT -5
This guy here is the main character in my story. He's a magickally enhanced cyborg. In the world of my story there are naturally made orbs that hold the essence of a certain element and thus lets the user have the power of that element. These orbs are known as Omni's. There are flame, wind, tide, stone, pure, evil and the fabled master Omni's which cover all elemnets. Only certain people can use Omni's, these people are known as Kaiser's. Thats just the basics of my story. I'm working on more, but it's hard coming up with original stuff. Tell me what you think.
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Post by jnight on Feb 13, 2006 20:34:20 GMT -5
He certainly is colorful! How many characters are in your story and what is this dude's name? I kinda get a Tron vibe from him (the glowing blue), but I haven't seen that movie since 1982.
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Post by bayushigemma on Feb 14, 2006 0:54:53 GMT -5
I agree with Jnight a very Tron vibe which isn't a bad thing I just wonder if you even know what Tron is since that was in our youths. The effects come off pretty good here if your going for a glowing vibe and is this more of a super hero thing?
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Post by Galius on Feb 14, 2006 1:36:02 GMT -5
Lol, yeah your right about the Tron thing. I've never actually seen the movie, but I have seen clips of it on TV shows and now that I think about it you're right. I dig it though.
Not sure on a name for him yet. I don't want it to be something lame like HYT-2133 or whatever. Though I don't know what you'd name a cyborg if you're not going the serial number route. I'll work it out and keep you updated.
There are gonna be quite a few characters cause my story doesn't cover just one persons journey. Its gonna have a CM vibe you could say, except there won't be nearly as many characters. My recently draw blind swordsman, Mekura Kage will be joining this guy in my story.
And as you may have noticed this cyborg has an Omni in his gun arm, sword and head. Him having these will draw alot of hate and fear towrds him for the simple fact that he is not human and only certain humans are supposed to be able to use Omni's.
Thanks on the glow compliment BG. Took me awhile to do it. No he isn't a superhero, but he does kinda resemble one.
Thanks for the feedback guys!
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Post by bayushigemma on Feb 14, 2006 1:42:30 GMT -5
You know what might be a cool cocept for this doing some robots or showing his Cyborg/robotic side to him.
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Post by Galius on Feb 14, 2006 6:01:24 GMT -5
Good idea!
I'll have to see what I can whip up.
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Post by valo777 on Feb 24, 2006 15:03:46 GMT -5
wow i had no idea this was here until you changed your avatar. i love this idea with the omni. but i have a few questions about it. where do you get omni? dose it have to be passed down from person to person? and it is a gem or just a essence of it the power inside of you? i was just wondering but i do love everything about it. lastly have you come up with a name yet.
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Post by Galius on Feb 25, 2006 1:41:28 GMT -5
Good questions brotha!
Actually, I reworked it since I posted that drawing and Kaisers are born with a certain omni within them and omni are also made within their natural climate (flame=deserts or volcanos etc.)
In the earlier part of my story world there were entire tribes of element specific Kaisers, but as the world progressed and Kaisers began to mix with normal people many of them were killed out of fear and many of them were just never born because of the mixing.
This here cyborg now simply known as The Einlanzer.
More to come when I've worked it out.
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Post by valo777 on Feb 25, 2006 12:09:34 GMT -5
i like his name dude it fits way better then some stupid thing like XJ900. i was just wondering is it possible for someone to have more then one omni? if an omni kills another can they living one get the dead persons omni or dose it just disappear of the face of the earth.
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Post by Galius on Feb 25, 2006 12:47:16 GMT -5
Thanks man.
The answer is yes if it is the same element. So if a flame omni guy wastes a another flame omni guy his omni will join with the victors omni to make a more powerful one.
The answer is also no becuase no omni of different elements are fit to co-exist in the same Kaiser. The force of the elements fighting would simply shred the Kaiser apart.
So yes if a flame Kaiser kills a water Kaiser his omni vanishes.
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Post by valo777 on Feb 25, 2006 23:30:59 GMT -5
dose the omni have different levals and what type of attacks dose each have. dose it sommon the water or is it just a beam of energy that resembals the type of omni that it is. ;D
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Post by Galius on Feb 26, 2006 2:09:13 GMT -5
Thats something I really haven't thought out. Actual Kaisers need a special glove/gauntlet that materializes their weapon from whatever element they are.
Actually, I'll draw up some sketches for ya soon showing some things.
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Post by Galius on Feb 26, 2006 2:38:26 GMT -5
Here's what I mean with the channeler. The Einlanzer can't do this becuase he is not an actual Kaiser, his omni simply power him and give him minor elemental abilities. Kaisers summonable weapon is chosen at birth and etched into his/her heart stone by either the father or elder of the people and it is done through a ceremony.
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Post by Eli Parker on Feb 26, 2006 3:31:05 GMT -5
Hi i am new to this forum but i think this guy looks pretty tough! I bet he could beat people up. I am curious about his left hand. is it a gun or something? I am impressed with the way you did his hair.
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Post by Galius on Feb 26, 2006 5:02:23 GMT -5
Hey thanks man!
Yeah it's a gun.
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