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Post by Galius on Apr 12, 2006 23:52:03 GMT -5
Thanks man.
He being the maker of Einlanzer? Theres something to think about.
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Post by valo777 on Apr 13, 2006 21:06:25 GMT -5
if you don't make him his creator will he be a Kaiser. and if so what omni will he have.
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Post by shipp on May 1, 2006 19:36:09 GMT -5
Hey that is a very cool concept and story. I hope you come up with some more.
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Post by Galius on May 2, 2006 2:38:00 GMT -5
Thanks alot dude.
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Post by valo777 on May 2, 2006 11:26:27 GMT -5
so have you figured out what Einlanzer's main mission will be?
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Post by Galius on May 2, 2006 14:03:18 GMT -5
Well I think he's gonna have a couple.
1) Eliminate someone (havent really decided who, maybe a king or a great sage or something)
2) Find and secure Einhander
3) and of course locate and secure the master Omni
objective 1 and 3 will tie into eachother somehow.
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Post by valo777 on May 2, 2006 21:24:10 GMT -5
how do Arai Dissonance and Will Cogburn fit into the story with Einlanzer? are they his enemies?
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Post by Galius on May 2, 2006 22:38:01 GMT -5
Hmmm
These two actually have nothing to do with the Einlanzer himself. They're both part of an underground resistance against a cause yet to be decided
You see my story has a main story (einlanzer) and many sub stories that all tie into eachother in differant ways
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Post by valo777 on May 2, 2006 22:40:11 GMT -5
Hmmm These two actually have nothing to do with the Einlanzer himself. They're both part of an underground resistance against a cause yet to be decided You see my story has a main story (einlanzer) and many sub stories that all tie into eachother in differant ways thats cool kinda like Sin City.
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Post by Galius on May 3, 2006 2:02:50 GMT -5
yep
keeps the story more interesting
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Post by valo777 on May 3, 2006 22:37:10 GMT -5
i was just wondering if you are working on any action pics with Einlanzer vs Mekura Kage because that would be an awesome fight to see.
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Post by Galius on May 4, 2006 0:34:49 GMT -5
Not at the moment, but I will try to get one started.
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Post by Galius on Jan 7, 2007 3:28:10 GMT -5
Einhander- Omni Enhanced Cyborg
Date of creation- unknown
Omni's used- Stone (sword) and Tide (gun-arm)
Wherabouts- Unknown
Einhander was created for two reasons; one was to see if one could harness the power of Kaiser without actually being one and the second was to infact destroy what he was created to imitate.
Einhanders production went off without any serious delays and he was completed in the timeframe his Creator had set. The only problem worth mentioning was an Omni burst that streamed across and burned the Creators face. This was, but a minor setback and production rolled forward without a halt. The Creator had finished the the building phases and began testing. Einhander passed all the early test stages with flying colors.
It wasn't until he was sent on his first real mission that things started to take a turn for the worse. The Creator briefed Einhander on his tasks and then dismissed him. The very next thing Einhander did was attack the Creator, removing one of his arms and he would have removed his head if the Creator had not used his own Omni against his beloved creation. This attack short circuited Einhander and he crumpled like a doll to the ground. The Creator patched himself up and cursed himself and his d**ned mistakes. He skulked off to his office to review his notes in hopes of finding an answer to what the hell went wrong with Einhander.
He eventually drifted off into a deep and painful slumber. The next morning when he arose he went back to where he had battled with Einhander only to find him gone and his lab in shambles. Somehow Einhander awoke and vanished into the night, but not after laying waste to the machines and equipment that constructed him.
Thus the Creator had to start from scratch.
In comes Einlanzer...
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Post by jnight on Jan 7, 2007 11:36:55 GMT -5
I like the depth and struggle you gave to the Creator. I'm now curious as to why Einhander turned on his creator in such a violent way and how Mekura Kage fits in with all of this (if he does).
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Post by Galius on Jan 7, 2007 21:51:53 GMT -5
I like the depth and struggle you gave to the Creator. I'm now curious as to why Einhander turned on his creator in such a violent way and how Mekura Kage fits in with all of this (if he does). Very good questions! I will try to write something to answer them here in the next few days.
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